Post by firebird101 on May 1, 2009 18:05:53 GMT -5
Yups, I'm writing a book. Please read what I've done already and rate.
1,2,3/10- Very Poor.
4,5,6/10 Fair, but Needs Work.
7,8,9/10- Very Good.
10/10- Excellent!
Help Me!
I'm working on a trilogy of three books. The main title is Legend Of The Silver Moon. I could really use some help and suggestions on it. I also need a spellchecker/editor and some general feedback on the chapters I've already done.
Chapters per book: 25
Current Book: One: Hope
Completed Chapters: 5 (6 in progress)
Genre: Fantasy
Rating- PG13- L-V
Plot Overview...
Set in the hopefully-not-so-near-future, the earth is dying of pollution and it will give and destroy itself on the first night of the full Silver Moon.
Aden, Shawn, Kasumi, and Kyoko are four seemingly ordinary teenagers. They have only one thing in common; a mysterious raven. The raven has been appearing in recurring nightmares for each of them. When the creature reveals that the four have a shared destiny, the timid Aden, prideful Shawn, motherly Kasumi, and headstrong Kyoko must learn to work together without killing each other first. Supposedly, they are also the reincarnations of the four ancient guardians of our world. The Soul-Warriors; The Fire-Warrior, The Earth-Warrior, The Water-Warrior, and The Air-Warrior. There are four stones that each must gather, the Firestone, Earthstone, Waterstone, and Airstone. With these four stone combined to create the Stone Of Existence, it must be taken to the mystical Starlight-Pool. This will awaken a creature who's mighty cry will save the world and restore it to it's former glory.
The link to further info sight in below.
evluvr101.proboards.com/index.cgi
1,2,3/10- Very Poor.
4,5,6/10 Fair, but Needs Work.
7,8,9/10- Very Good.
10/10- Excellent!
Help Me!
I'm working on a trilogy of three books. The main title is Legend Of The Silver Moon. I could really use some help and suggestions on it. I also need a spellchecker/editor and some general feedback on the chapters I've already done.
Chapters per book: 25
Current Book: One: Hope
Completed Chapters: 5 (6 in progress)
Genre: Fantasy
Rating- PG13- L-V
Plot Overview...
Set in the hopefully-not-so-near-future, the earth is dying of pollution and it will give and destroy itself on the first night of the full Silver Moon.
Aden, Shawn, Kasumi, and Kyoko are four seemingly ordinary teenagers. They have only one thing in common; a mysterious raven. The raven has been appearing in recurring nightmares for each of them. When the creature reveals that the four have a shared destiny, the timid Aden, prideful Shawn, motherly Kasumi, and headstrong Kyoko must learn to work together without killing each other first. Supposedly, they are also the reincarnations of the four ancient guardians of our world. The Soul-Warriors; The Fire-Warrior, The Earth-Warrior, The Water-Warrior, and The Air-Warrior. There are four stones that each must gather, the Firestone, Earthstone, Waterstone, and Airstone. With these four stone combined to create the Stone Of Existence, it must be taken to the mystical Starlight-Pool. This will awaken a creature who's mighty cry will save the world and restore it to it's former glory.
The link to further info sight in below.
evluvr101.proboards.com/index.cgi